1. “There was just something terribly off-putting about Sonic’s human-like proportions, furry human-like hands and worst of all, his creepy human-like teeth.”
2. There was something off-putting about Sonic’s proportions, hands and teeth.
3.
a) There was something terribly off-putting about Sonic’s proportions, hands and teeth.
b) There was something terribly off-putting about Sonic’s human proportions, hands and teeth.
c) There was something terribly off-putting about Sonic’s human-like proportions, furry hands and creepy teeth.
d) There was something off-putting about Sonic’s hands and teeth.
e) There was something off-putting about Sonic’s teeth.
f) Sonic
g) Off-putting teeth
h) Off-putting: unpleasant, disconcerting or repellant.
Thesaurus: off-putting, creepy, hideous.
i) There was something off-putting about Sonic’s proportions, hands and teeth; yet I couldn’t look away.
j) There was something incredibly off-putting about Sonic the Hedgehog’s human-like proportions, furry gloveless hands and pearlescent gnashing human teeth.
k) As soon as I laid my eyes upon him, there was something incredibly off-putting about Sonic the Hedgehog’s human-like proportions, furry gloveless hands and pearlescent gnashing human teeth.
l) As soon as I laid my eyes upon the abomination that is Sonic the Hedgehog, I could see that there was something horrendously off-putting about his disfigured human-like proportions, his hirsute naked hands and his pearlescent gnashing human-like teeth.
Oliver Warne Nonfiction 